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Oscillations

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Girl, I'd write you a poem.

I'd write about your inflected accent –
how it tickles my ossicles
with violent flutters

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until the whole damn chamber
clutters with echoes
of you;

and how
all the while
my heart's torm-
ented by the silent passion
in your eyes, and I
shrink away from you
like a Gorgon
from a mirror.

But words alone – they mean but little,
and are fickle, and verbose;
and the Poem often withers
even faster than the Rose.
feelings, sound, poetry
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LancelotPrice's avatar
Nicely done. It feels like a classic, modernised. And with a touch of wry humour.

One thing I do not understand, the linebreak at torm- ented. But of course I ain't got no rhythm. :)